The ceiling light flickered. I heard the squeak of rubber on the asphalt, some horns and angry Chinese shouts.
Great how many details so that we readers can better imagine the scene.
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The ceiling light flickered. I heard the squeak of rubber on the asphalt, some horns and angry Chinese shouts.
Great how many details so that we readers can better imagine the scene.