Thanks for catching the error. I corrected it now..
Thanks for reading- I’m going to be posting part 2 in the next couple days.
Would you advise me to change my main tag for part 2 - I never feel confident in my tags. At this point, I’m not sure how much it matters but it’s worth at least contemplating.
No rules, it doesn't matter if it's fiction or not.
I read your story and I'm looking forward to reading more (so that's a good sign).
One thing I did notice, you used 'breath' instead of 'breathe' - a breath of fresh air - breathe the life back into it.
Thanks for catching the error. I corrected it now..
Thanks for reading- I’m going to be posting part 2 in the next couple days.
Would you advise me to change my main tag for part 2 - I never feel confident in my tags. At this point, I’m not sure how much it matters but it’s worth at least contemplating.
Thanks again.