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RE: Birth of the Neví - Chapter 9 - A'mara Books

in #writing6 years ago

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A couple of interesting segments today.
You see another glimpse into Yidal Sipper's personality - he must have been a difficult one to be a daughter to. At least Ja'tel can see through it!

And poor Vanti. What has she got herself into? Thing is, this is so very true to life. The person infatuated with the "bad news boy" is unlikely to listen to anyone other than the teacher of time. It is equally difficult to be the loving observer. Cyanus is helping one love come out of a bad relationship, but another person he loves (his former chola) on the verge of entering one... And there is almost nothing he can do to help at this stage! When the loved one pushes too hard at this stage, all they do is push the wedge between themselves and the one they love... It's so hard!