Reading this tale in its completed form was really awesome! Your method of introducing us to the setting was excellent. The sound of the can hitting, the strange way the shoes feel different... I'm really smiling at the conclusion.
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Thank you Wallay, I really enjoyed writing this one even though it takes me a long time to write something, and even though I don't consider myself much of a writer, quite a few believe I can write very well; I think it's perhaps a case of lack of esteem as a writer. I'll get over it and write more, but it seems to be taking it's sweet time hahahahaha!!!
You are welcome sir,you can actually write very well ,I love it ❤️
Also ,thank you so much for the help ,we are grateful sir 🙏