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RE: New Story - again written exclusively on Steemit - WiP - Bouncer Part 33

in #writing7 years ago (edited)

Another outstanding part and a perfect plot Michel all this creative work
I liked your presentation of the roles of the characters in this part, their roles were not excessive at the same time reasonable
The arrival of Victor in a new suit surprised me and reminded me of Pratt Pitt in (''Ocean's Twelve'') :D :D
What I liked too: - Anthony? It really seems an interesting figure I did not recognize in previous sections
I did not know for certain that Joe had a military background
I really enjoyed , thanks for this excellent post :))