Amazing!!! Man, how I love a nice piece of horror. I don't know what was scarier and more chill-giving: the real, disgusting guy from the image, Zayne's huge dumbness or the way that Nadia mastered the situation. I truly enjoyed this story, in a weird way that made me cringe and chuckle at the same time. Standing applause!
P.D.: I'm hosting a writing contest this week and would love to have you participating :)
i cringed the entire time while trying to write the Zayne character.
If i have time ill def try to add something to your contest. thanks for reading.