in #your5 years ago (edited)

Under the rain that is currently pouring down on my city, I pray, hoping that everything will be as beautiful as ever.

"De ... where are you? Help me "shouted dennis

I immediately walked out of the room and headed towards where the sound of Dennis was located

"Astaghfirullah brother ... why you again, bro?" I asked in surprise after seeing my brother come in a state full of wounds
"Ouch ... Arnindyah, my only sister, rather than you asking a lot, you'd better help treat my wound dech" said Bang Dennis

I stopped every question that I really wanted to ask. I also helped Bang Dennis to the room. Then I immediately took the first aid kit.

"Aw ... slowly, why?" said dennis bang
"Yes, yes, why are you, bro?" fight again? " I said
"You don't need to know," said dennis curtly
"Surely this is because of your actions with your friends, right? Who is that? Hmm ... dragon, dharma, fare and amec? Never mind, stop all this, it's no use knowing! " I said
"If you just want to advise me, you better go back to your room," said Bang Dennis
"Yes, yes, sorry," I said

Bang Dennis, he is my only brother. In the past, he was very kind, never daring to hurt or fight people, because for him life would always be free for others. But now my brother has changed! He turned into an unknown person, he was rude, whoever he fought against, not afraid of anything, even ... death he served. I don't want that to continue, I want my brother to be my brother again. All that ... would not have happened if the father and mother did not decide to separate.


At school, there is a girl who is able to captivate the heart of dennis, she is named Thalitha. Thalitha is a student who is quite accomplished, she is beautiful and kind. However, he is often seen strange by the people around him, because he often disappears without news in a fairly long period of time.

"Tha, I like you, you want to be my girlfriend?" dennis said to thalitha
"Hmm ... sorry den, I didn't reject you, but I just don't want you to be disappointed" said thalitha
"No tha, whatever happens, I love you," Dennis said

Thalitha could not avoid it anymore, she also accepted dennis as her boyfriend.


Day after day they passed together. Until the relationship has been running for several months. And all this time, Kak Thalitha has succeeded in changing the attitude of Bang Dennis. Not only Bangnis, but also Bangnis's friends. I'm so happy.

Naga, who initially hated girls for being hurt, has now opened herself to every girl who wants to be close to her.
Amec, his initial attitude was ignorant, arrogant and did not want to know, now much more attentive
Fare, his cold attitude, has now changed to be very friendly
And finally Dharma, he is now a more open person.

Thalitha had a big influence on my brother and his friends. However, the bitter truth must be felt again, when Bang knew that sis Thalitha was sick, and it was not an ordinary illness, but cancer, a very dangerous disease, which could take a person's life if he wanted.

Since knowing that, Bang Dennis is paying more attention to Thalitha.

"Den, I'm fine, don't overdo it, I'm fine," said thata
"Tha ... I'm your girlfriend, I love you, and I don't want to lose you," Dennis said
"I will not leave you anyway," said thata

Every day, as much as possible dennis continue to be beside thalitha. Enjoy every remaining second. While continuing to pray that thalitha did not go away.


Bang dennis asked me, bang dragon and the other brothers to give a beautiful dinner for kak thalitha. I and the other brothers certainly gladly accepted it.

Beautiful night, the place out door, which is only intended for Bang Dennis and Kak Thalitha has been completed.
Thalitha looks beautiful tonight, with a white dress she was wearing. While bang dennis also looks handsome in the black coat he was wearing.

"Welcome to our romantic partner tonight," said the dragon
"Hopefully tonight will be a beautiful and unforgettable night for both of you," said Dharma and fare
"I hope you get the happiness that you dream of," I said and amec bang
"Thank you, everyone" said Bang Dennis and Kak Thalitha

The night went on smoothly, until a scream was heard from the croak in dennis. I and the other brothers immediately went to the source of the sound. And when we got there, sis thalitha was in dennis bang.

"Tha ... please don't leave me," said dennis with tears ready to come out
"Den, I'm already not strong, I will go and I beg not to be sad or cry" said thata
"No tha, you're strong, you can't leave me," said Bang Dennis
"I'm not strong anymore den, I have to go, you can't be sad huh, continue your life, I'm sure your life will be happy even without me, and remember ... I will always be in your heart" said thata and thata closed his eyes which will never be able to reopen
"Talitha ..." Bang Dennis shouted

I could not hold back my tears, the departure of Kak Thata was so fast, when I started to see the smile of Bangnis, and now I am repeatedly seeing the tears of Bangnis

"Sincerely, Sis thata bang, he's already happy there, at least he can feel the warmth of brother's affection, and I think that's enough for him to calm down there" I said
"Yes, deck," said Bang Dennis

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The departure of Kak Thata left a very deep wound for Bang Dennis, but the last mandate given by Kak Thata made him survive and be able to live his life as before.

Happiness also came, the father and mother again decided to be together and it was enough to cure my sadness and bang dennis.

"I hope you calm down there tha, I love you," said dennis in front of the Nissan stone kak thata.

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