I have to say that has interesting as this one is, and good overall, it seems like you went from very good quality going down a bit, the content itself isn't bad, but a bit more of edition for the presentation could help a bit in my opinion.
You also doubled the Kyoko pic ;)
Lol, marrying someone because he thought they had sex, not happening in modern times, hahaha.
Anyways, I've never seen this one, might pick it up and give it a chance. Consider talking to Bla or Ahmadmanga if you want some tips on improving edition for better visual presentation, I also suggest you see the latest post I made for a way I found to present the pictures in a visually appealing way while also referencing the source properly, I'm no master of HTML and edition though, so I just recommend you take the pic format.
Thank you for reading my post and for the feedback, that's very helpful. It is much appreciated! Actually I doubled Kyoko pic on purpose because I wanted to illustrate the relationship interactions. Like on the first image I wanted to illustrate the interactions between Kyoko and Yusako and Kyoko and Shun, and on the second one I wanted to illustrate the relationship between Shun and Kyoko and Shun and Asuna. But it is my fault I did not do a good job illustrating those interactions.
Yeah they are very conservative in that anime haha.
Thank you again and I will talk with Bla or Ahmadmanga regarding the editing part.