Thank you for reading my post and for the feedback, that's very helpful. It is much appreciated! Actually I doubled Kyoko pic on purpose because I wanted to illustrate the relationship interactions. Like on the first image I wanted to illustrate the interactions between Kyoko and Yusako and Kyoko and Shun, and on the second one I wanted to illustrate the relationship between Shun and Kyoko and Shun and Asuna. But it is my fault I did not do a good job illustrating those interactions.
Yeah they are very conservative in that anime haha.
Thank you again and I will talk with Bla or Ahmadmanga regarding the editing part.