Not bothered at all. A good critique is always welcome. I still liked the way this sounded when speaking it, but I can see where the other rhyming scheme would have worked too.
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Not bothered at all. A good critique is always welcome. I still liked the way this sounded when speaking it, but I can see where the other rhyming scheme would have worked too.
Hey thanks. Glad you didn't take it in a wrong way :)