Tree-Tub, a random Poem and Sketch.

in #art7 years ago

tub-tree

Bathtub with a tree.
Always with the loud music.
You dance around me.
Can't you see me relaxing.
Just let me fucking be.

'Tub-tree' image and poem by @Discordiant




I want to thank @crimsonclad for inspiring both this drawing and this poem.
She told a story of a dark night-club and a tree in a tub.
This was what happened in my head after that story.

All her fault.



Thanks!

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Hey @discordiant cute little piece of work! The poem is nice too, although I feel it would have sounded a bit better if the rhyme scheme was abcba. I love it when writing and art come together! :) I tried doing this myself; I would really appreciate it, do check out my new charcoal sketch here 🙂

I wasn't trying overly hard with the poem, since it was mostly intended to prevent the post from being a straight image only post. I will check out your work, thanks.

Oh I see, yep we all try not to post image-only posts 'cause it feels boring :) ... And I really apologise if you felt bad cuz I didn't mean it that way ..

Not bothered at all. A good critique is always welcome. I still liked the way this sounded when speaking it, but I can see where the other rhyming scheme would have worked too.

Hey thanks. Glad you didn't take it in a wrong way :)

I absolutely love this sketch! Nicely done!

Thanks, I rarely draw anything anymore, but this just had to get out.

smh, the language is so crimmy. What am I going to do with you kids!

Nice drawing, @discordiant
I like the hatching within the sketch.

If it wants to be a bathtree who are we to tell it not to be a bathtree. :)

@discordiant Thanks for publishing this Charming instant in time for yourself. Upvoted.

nice draw, i like the trace!

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nice work, my friend, keep it up

@discordiant verry nice artwork,..
and beatifull quotes.
please follow, upvote and read my post @Poetric-Power, so we can share our posted each other.
and Have a great day