Hey @discordiant cute little piece of work! The poem is nice too, although I feel it would have sounded a bit better if the rhyme scheme was abcba. I love it when writing and art come together! :) I tried doing this myself; I would really appreciate it, do check out my new charcoal sketch here 🙂
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I wasn't trying overly hard with the poem, since it was mostly intended to prevent the post from being a straight image only post. I will check out your work, thanks.
Oh I see, yep we all try not to post image-only posts 'cause it feels boring :) ... And I really apologise if you felt bad cuz I didn't mean it that way ..
Not bothered at all. A good critique is always welcome. I still liked the way this sounded when speaking it, but I can see where the other rhyming scheme would have worked too.
Hey thanks. Glad you didn't take it in a wrong way :)