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Oh I see, yep we all try not to post image-only posts 'cause it feels boring :) ... And I really apologise if you felt bad cuz I didn't mean it that way ..

Not bothered at all. A good critique is always welcome. I still liked the way this sounded when speaking it, but I can see where the other rhyming scheme would have worked too.

Hey thanks. Glad you didn't take it in a wrong way :)