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I think they might be more welcoming if you replaced "follow me" with check me out :)
Because a lot of people are spamming links in other peoples posts.

aw thank you @kristyglas you are helping me a lot with your feedback!, my first language is spanish but I like how updated is the people that speak in english, I'm trying to be a professional english talker like you lol. See you around at discord! (I just read the post of the WhaleBot option and lookingForaNiche topic, I'm curious)

Thank you :)
I usually re-edit my posts when I notice mistakes.
It helps the posts seem more fluent in the end.
Discord has been really fun, so good luck :)