RE: Bad Dreams & Broken Hearts 09: “Don't be a stranger, Samhain!”

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arthur.grafo (69)in #baddreamsandbrokenhearts • 7 years ago

In your original copy, I suggest you change 'shown' with 'shone'.

I'm enjoying binging on your story too much to stop and comment right now.

7 years ago in #baddreamsandbrokenhearts by arthur.grafo (69)

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mishaburnett (47) 7 years ago

Thanks for your comments, and you're right, it should be "shone".

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