I hate cliffhangers. Still liked it, though 8-).
Proof of reading:
"the women takes" => "the women take"
Pound sign goes before the number, no full stop after "cash"
Comma before and after "Phill"?
"second hand" => "second-hand"
"rather worn out" => "rather worn" or "worn out"
I think.
I was going to mention the £ coming before the amount. It's another inconsistency around the world that bedevils us programmers.
Thanks, mate. Now that my Amazon daughter is sleeping I will try to correct things.