4 Word Rhyming Competition... WE HAVE A WINNER AND A GOOD SAMARATIN HELPS OUT.

[karenb54]

The 4 word competition has now ended. The judge has been going over and over the entries to choose the ones she likes.

BUT

WE HAVE A UPDATE

Our lovely @kiwideb had decided to help the judge pick a winner and runner up. She wrote a lovely poem without being asked. So for her help and for just being a fabulous Steemer, I will be paying @kiwideb 1sbd for helping me and writing these poems.
13 seconds ago Transfer 1.000 SBD to kiwideb A thank you for helping me out with... https://steemit.com/competition/@karenb54/4-word-rhyming-competition-we-have-a-winner-and-a-good-samaratin-helps-out

@kiwideb
It’s Easter weekend
I should be relaxing
It doesn’t pan out
My workload is maxing!

Friday, it’s stocktake
Not Hot Cross Bun Day
Saturday, it’s baking,
And shopping – not a Funday.

Sunday, a party,
Now that days a winner!
Monday – birthday eve,
And chicken for dinner.

AND

I like rhyming poems
So if I was a judge
@purplemagic’s poem
Would get a little nudge

But some folks think that poems
Shouldn’t have to rhyme
And @syukrii’s entry
Makes my heart cry every time

WINNER
2sbd's

13 seconds ago Transfer 2.000 SBD to purplemagic CONGRATULATIONS... WINNER OF https://steemit.com/competition/@karenb54/4-word-rhyming-competition-we-have-a-winner-and-a-good-samaratin-helps-out

@purplemagic
My alarm clock bawks like a chicken in the yard,
Waking up on a Monday is Oh so very hard!
But wait! It's Easter, I don't have to leave my bed,
What a funday I'll have writing poetry instead!

RUNNER UP
1sbd

12 seconds ago Transfer 1.000 SBD to syukrii CONGRATULATIONS - RUNNER UP OF https://steemit.com/competition/@karenb54/4-word-rhyming-competition-we-have-a-winner-and-a-good-samaratin-helps-out

@syukrii
I have a bitter memory on Monday ..
That's the most historic day of my life ..
Certainly not Funday I mean ..
I was almost shot by Indonesian soldiers who fought against the Aceh Separatist Movement ..
But my Chicken died shot by their bullet ..

Thank you son-of-satire

Comments

[jazzybells]

Congratulations to the winners! Well done :)

[kiwideb]

Congratulations, @purplemagic and @syukrii! I'm glad my little nudge was helpful to the judge. You're both worthy winners. And thanks to Karen for the koha. Your generous heart (in all senses of the word) will be missed while you're on break.

Koha is a New Zealand Māori custom which can be translated as gift, present, offering, donation or contribution.

[roselyn028]

Congratulations to the Winners and more power to this contest and the person behind it. God bless

[karenb54]

Thank you :)

[alpayasteem]

Congrat to winners.

[syukrii]

Thanks to the judge who has chosen me ..
I am very happy to get the prize ..

it is the bitter memories I have ever experienced, if the bullet was burden maybe now I have gone,but God still loves me ..
I do not want my country back in the conflict, becsuse many innocent people die of conflict.

[kiwideb]

I don't know much about that conflict, but for me your poem summed up the horror of war, and the unexpected sudden other losses of it, in just a few lines. Well written.

[cecicastor]

I'll wait until you come back for more poetry (or in my case, pooh-etry)! See you later alligator!

[karenb54]

Thanks hun :)

[purplemagic]

Thank you very much, it was fun to participate and I appreciate the recognition 😉

[karenb54]

You are welcome, well done :)

[abhinavmendhe]

Did this competition end? are you going to conduct any more competitions like these in future?

[karenb54]

Hi, the competition starts on a Monday, finishes on a Friday and Yes I will :)