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RE: 4 Word Rhyming Competition... WE HAVE A WINNER AND A GOOD SAMARATIN HELPS OUT.

in #competition7 years ago

Thanks to the judge who has chosen me ..
I am very happy to get the prize ..

it is the bitter memories I have ever experienced, if the bullet was burden maybe now I have gone,but God still loves me ..
I do not want my country back in the conflict, becsuse many innocent people die of conflict.

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I don't know much about that conflict, but for me your poem summed up the horror of war, and the unexpected sudden other losses of it, in just a few lines. Well written.