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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #9: 199 words-10SBD prize pool!

in #contest7 years ago

Topic: Destructiveness of disobedience

Cockaadoodoo was the communal cry agreed by the Chicken community when there is an emergency. Hen-rie is the only daughter of Hen-rietta. She was a maiden hen who was well sought by the cocks. Her mother told her to always tie a pebble across her waistline hence the cocks takes abusive advantages of her. Hen-rie wouldn't listen because to her, it made her look less attractive.

The cocks were getting frustrated by Hen-rie's refusals and held a meeting on how to get her. They hatched a plan and the first thing they sought to do was commonise the communal cry "cockaadoodoo" so it won't make much meaning when their victim decides to seek help. Second plan was to make sure she wasn't with her waist-pebble which served as an obtrusion.

Their day came when Hen-rie decided to take a stroll. Before leaving, her mum kept hammering the need to stay protected. She wore her waist-pebble when her mother was still in sight. Once out in the woods alone, she quickly removed it and was swinging her waist with much fervor. She needn't swing it much as the cocks lay in wait. Only this time disobedience would disqualify her cockaadoodoo!

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Interesting piece. Success

Thank you big boss @eurogee

Heedless fly follws Corp to grave. Nice one. Good luck!!!