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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #9: 199 words-10SBD prize pool!

in #contest7 years ago (edited)

Having just two loaves of bread and a single bowl of water is what two tortoise otida and his younger sister talofijo where left with after the death of their parent. These two tortoise have no idea of what the real animal kingdom was like, because everything they need has always been made available by their parent, they don't even know if they have a family because they have not seen any one of them before, not even once. The only person they ever grew up knowing was their parent. The oldest tortoise otida start to crack his brain on how he and talofijo will survive all the days of their life at the animal kingdom, he said within himself he will never beg to survive. Then he remember how his mother will always praise him when ever he sings while talofijo his younger sister would dance just to entertain their bored parent. He jump up and said yes, it is time to make end needs as a singer. He decided to discuss this his brilliant with the talofijo. They both agreed with these brilliant idea of Otida singing and talofijo dancing in other to meet up ends needs.

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Wow lots of beautiful entries but i love this

I think i need to improve my entry now Nice job @mayowadavid.

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