It surprised me in the direction it took, but not so much in an original way. Honestly it seemed a bit forced, but I suppose that can happen when you're under a deadline...it's certainly happened to me. I'm still looking forward to the next stories though.
I didn't mean to hurt your feelings. Maybe it's just my reading of the piece. I certainly couldn't do what you're doing in writing a story every day. It's kinda like Harlan Ellison isn't it?
Awesome, check out the winning story from yesterday. #
Been there, read that :)
Cool? what did you think?
It surprised me in the direction it took, but not so much in an original way. Honestly it seemed a bit forced, but I suppose that can happen when you're under a deadline...it's certainly happened to me. I'm still looking forward to the next stories though.
Wow, okay, well thanks for the honest feedback.
I didn't mean to hurt your feelings. Maybe it's just my reading of the piece. I certainly couldn't do what you're doing in writing a story every day. It's kinda like Harlan Ellison isn't it?
LOL no i was serious you gave honest feedback. No hurt feelings i wrote that piece in thirty minutes. I think expanded it wouldn't feel so rushed
Just read the story too...., and i really loved the way it went...,
I guess we all just have what we look forward to in a piece...,
Nonetheless @markrmorrisjr We are looking forward to more stories from you