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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #11: 199 words-10SBD prize pool!

in #contest7 years ago

There's no Love like His Love

One night a guy and a girl were driving home from the theater watching their favorite movie. The guy sensed that there was something wrong because of the painful silence they shared between them that night and so, he frankly inquired the girl what's wrong. The girl then asked the boy to pull over because she wanted to talk. She told him that her feelings towards him had changed and that it was time to move on.

A silence tear slid down his cheek as he slowly reached into his pocket and passed her a folded note.

At that moment, a drunk driver was speeding down that very same street. The driver felt dizzy and suddenly swerved right into the drivers seat, killing the boy. Miraculously, the girl survived. Remembering the note, she pulled it out and read it.

"Without your love, I would die"

The girl felt like her heart was crumpled a many times. She felt loneliness to herself and don't know why.

After spending days and nights crying, she just realized that she still love the boy and there's nothing compares to the love like his love.