- Rules Updated 2.24.18
We-All-Write!
Hi everyone!!
About a week ago I thought up a new game to play on Steemit. It turned out to be a ton of fun and I really wanted to share the fun with others.
I realized very quickly how confusing it was for other people to follow along in the fun. The story that was being written and the comments were scattered over three other posts.
The question then became how to have the same fun but make it less confusing. I'm hoping I did figure that part out but the reason why this is being called a test.
Questions!
"What is this new game?" Jamie asked from the back of the room.
Answer: It's going to be called We-ALL-Write.
"What are the rules of this new game that you made up at the drop of a hat because you were bored and wanted a happy ending?" Susie jumps up and says.
Answer: I will list them all nice and neat below. Promise.
The main concept of the game: Add 'your part' to the ongoing story in the comments.
Once seven days have passed, I will divide the SBD payout of the post between everyone who added to the story. Please allow up to two days for the transfer.
Last I will make a video of the whole story and post it so we can all hear the whole story.
"What constitutes a part?" Too cool to freewrite, Charles James Matthew Hawthorn-Upintop the IV asks, and then lit his cigar.
Answer: More than a word or one sentence. Something to move the story along should be written. Cliffhangers are excellent endings for your part. Use your best judgment. We are all adults. Kind of. Well, maybe you are. I'm still rebelling. My poor son. 😁
Rules
Read this post.
Read the first part of 'The Story' in this post.
Look through the comments in this post for the heading: The Story~Part 2
Read all parts of the story you find in the comments of this post.
Open a comment box and label it: The Story~Part ? adding the next number in line for the story so we can follow the story in the correct order.
Post a comment with your story comment 'The Story~ part?' so people know someone is working on the next part and to wait before they post theirs.
Click on Edit comment and write your part then hit update so your part now shows.
HAVE FUN.
Be silly, happy, sad, etc, if inclined, when writing your part of 'The Story'. You know, be Free!
HAVE FUN.
There are no extra points for proper grammar or formatting.
Laugh, giggle and last HAVE FUN!
Now that that is as clear as I can ever be! Let's get on to the fun part!!
The Story~Part 1
Vacation finally over, Joyce slowly sunk down into the planes teeny tiny seat hoping beyond hope that no one else would sit down next to her.
The last day of her trip was the best that anyone could have asked for. The horseback riding on the white sand beaches, parasailing, and the secluded late night dinner, next to the ocean, with a very nice man, were all things a holiday is dreamed of.
When Joyce woke up in the morning to catch her flight her painful screaming from the sunburn she had everywhere could be heard through the whole hotel.
Thank goodness she had packed last night. This morning all she had to do was take a shower, dress and be on her way to the airport. Showering, a must this morning, was more like ten thousand needles pelting their way into her skin.
It was going to be a very long painful day thought Joyce.
Clothes came next, soft ones for the six-hour long plane ride. Joyce really had no idea how she was going to get through her day on this plane, burned to a crisp, not being able to move if someone squeezed in next to her in the middle seat.
Let the fun begin!
Please remember this is a test to see how it goes writing a story this way.
I do hope you, yes, YOU!! will give it a go and play along with us all.
Okay, really it's just me right now.............so please come join me so I'm not lonely!!
Snook
The Story - Part 20. The End for @snook
Joyce realized she must have been drugged and started drinking water but the spirit squirrel would not go away, screaming “snap out of it … you do not have much time!” She had to go to the bathroom again, but was hesitant just in case the squirrel was right. She asked the squirrel, “What do you want me to do?”
The squirrel told her to go to the bathroom and quickly. Since she had to go anyway, she followed as the squirrel jumped on top of seats and heads to race her there. As she reached the bathroom the squirrel told her, “Evan is waiting for you.”
She stopped in her tracks and asked, “how do you know about Evan?” The squirrel said I have known you most of your life, I am your guide and teacher. Choose, which life you want to live. Do you want to stay on this plane and die or find happiness with Evan?
Seconds felt like minutes, and time seemed to stop. Everything was in slow motion, and the squirrel told her the teleporter would be closing so she had to choose quickly.
Chills ran up and down her spine as she opened the bathroom door and walked inside. She was immediately teleported to the underwater sea world from her dreams. Evan was waiting for her and kissed her hand, she looked down and saw the lovely diamond on her hand.
One thing was certain, she felt more happiness with this being called Evan than either the co-pilot or the married Italian man. All her insecurities and fears were completely gone. She belonged to Evan.
She looked into Evan's eyes once again and could not keep her eyes off of him, he took her in his arms and their first kiss was one of eternity. She could barely think anymore in the hands of this amazing creature.
Besides, Queen Joyce of the underwater world had a nice ring to it, Joyce thought as Evan picked her up to carry her to the bedchamber.
Respectfully submitted, @eaglespirit.
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Stunning and Beautiful ending to the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WoooooooooooooooooooooT!!!
many hugsand THANK YOU @eaglespirit for everything you went out of your way to help with!!!!
Yay, I am so happy you liked it! I was kind of nervous with all this good writing and participation. Thank you all for making this a fun time for me Our creative minds really came together. I tend to prefer cliff hanger middle parts, so the ending came as a good challenge. Thank you @snook!! xx Eagle
Great ending! I attended the memorial service for the passengers on that ill-fated flight and I saw Joyce's name on the plaque, but since they were not able to recover the bodies they had no way of knowing that she had teleported off before it crashed. Or did she? Perhaps that is just her version of a watery grave since the plane went down in the middle of the ocean. 🤔
Just saying 😏
Wow. A new character in the story....@deaconlee ...... I was also in the memorial service. I told her family condolence.
Hey, I got to do the Ending ... my story! Buahahaah
What does that mean, that means that my story is it ... The End. Peace.
Eagle.
Sure sure, I know, the ends the end an all. But you were not at the memorial service so I thought that you might want to hear about it. 😇
I was there actually, even though the transporter closed in the plane, another one opened up and sucked all of the attendees into the under Sea World @snook, @deaconlee, @abrahamcera!
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
LOVE IT!!!!! <3
Hahahahhahah 🤣🤣🤣
Wow. This came to an end in a beautiful way. @snook we should do some more. This was fun
Yay! glad you liked the ending! Woop Woop. xx Eagle
Wooooooow. I cant believe this. I cant deny that this short story is good. Goodmjob guys. And the ending, really is the ending. Followed you. Because I know youll post more quality posts
Awww thank you so much guys!! I'm so glad you liked it .. we all came together pretty good I think! i got a little lost after two separate Part 7's but I tried to grasp it all and include it. Yay!! xx Eagle
Where are you from? You know, eagle is the Philippine's national bird. It signifies (or reminds us) strength.
It’s the USAs National Bird too, I am Native American from the USA. I just write. Apiece on my name and where I come from.
I love the thinking bonhomme icon ;) She's cute.
thank you! i deleted it, since i just submitted the ending ... :)
I love it ;) I love how we all added important aspects to the story, the being I introduced one of them. I love how the squirrel guided her. This was so much fun to read and write.
Thank you so much! I found your part very intriguing and hey why not, that's what stories are for, right? A great collaboration and thank you for your appreciation! :)
Now i can't wait for @snook to read it out ;)
Oh right! I forgot about that part, thank you so much for reminding me, this should be good. i hope she does voice tone changes .. buahahaaha
i wonder what the squirrel will sound like? heeeheeee
The Story~Part 2
Joyce closed her eyes; drifting off to sleep. Memories mixed with fantasies danced through her mind. The pain of the sunburn began to fade as her mind raced down the beach, and back to his deep brown eyes.
He asked if he could write her, but she didn't feel comfortable giving him her address, so she thanked him for the meal, and said good night. He whispered it was lovely to meet her, and she believed every word he told her throughout the night.
Joyce was so infused in the dream, she could hear his voice. The thick Italian accent was music to her ears.
"I would love some orange juice. My wife will have the champagne."
Joyce opened here eyes. Slowly, and painfully she pushed herself up, until she could see over her seat. Was she still dreaming? It couldn't be him. She shook her head and gave herself moment to awaken.
She peeked again. She wasn't dreaming. He was there. On a six hour flight, in first class, with her... and his wife.
The Story~Part 12
Shimmering silver and black, it was as though the clouds had entered the space where she stood, or perhaps she was within the clouds. They moved and shaped themselves, as lightning fluctuated within the apparition. The lightning danced and arced towards her, and Joyce could only stand there, as the shape formed the figure of a being.
The being stood tall, clad in a dark cape that looked like the deep black of space. Its face was completely covered. It extended a hand towards Joyce. She hesitated. Then she felt the floor under her buck and jerk and Joyce felt herself falling before the floor restabalised. She looked around, still wondering where everyone had gone.
The being before her waited patiently, arm out, hand inviting her, lightning dancing across its body. I must be dead, Joyce thought, this being has come for me.
The being shook its head, as though reading her thoughts. This gave her hope.
Joyce took the being's hand. Lightning danced upon her, tingling, tickling. Joyce gave a soft giggle. The being nodded, and then with another flash a white light, they had teleported to another location, one of beauty, of amazing smells, with lush green plants around her, yet above her, instead of skies, was the steel of metal and blinking lights of a...ship?
oh yay!!!
Great addition!
Thanks :) I HAD to add a touch of sci-fi/fantasy-esque thing in there hehehe
The Story. Part 6.
Immediately after the urgent knock on the door the captain announced over the intercom that everyone should take their seats and buckle up. Severe turbulence was expected.
When my Italian romantic opened the door we were greeted by a peeved looking stewardess. She told us that it was not allowed for two people to be in the restroom together. My romantic said," Ah, madam, we were just in there for but a moment surely you understand?"
"No, I don't understand", she growled. "Now please take your seats or I will have to report you to the captain."
At that very moment the plane lurched violently and in an attempt to keep his balance my romantics arm flew out an struck the stewardess in the face giving her a bloody nose and knocking her to the floor.
She jumped up and slapped Romeo's face and moved to the intercom to call the captain. As fate would have it another lurch hit us and I was violently flung into her as she reached for the intercom button. When I smashed into her body her head hit the cockpit door knocking her out.
Moments later the cockpit door was flung open and there stood the co-pilot with ...
Buaahahah ... violence!! Where in the world did this come from ...
Story~part 7
Wow! I couldn't believe my eyes, after three years of trying to get over him he reappears. Gosh he's still the most handsome man I've ever met. I don't know how long i stared at him with my heart in my eyes but a higher power finally gave me a voice
"so you did become a pilot" was that squeaky voice mine i internally cringed. He also was able to break out from the intense stir and asked the hostess besides him to help take the fallen angry hero off the floor.
"joyce, so good to see you" sizing me up with his soulful eyes he continued "you need to go back to your seat and buckle up cos the turbulence is about to get worse."
With that statement he held the open door subtly telling us to leave the restroom. Taking two paces towards him i suddenly remembered my vow......
Gosh! I didn't see this before writing mine. Arrggghh!! What do we do now?
uhmmmmmmmmmm.............not sure.....what do you want to do? any idea's?
okay, I fixed the directions so that should not happen again........did you want to rewrite your part? or just leave it as is? as they did post their part first.
Uhmm.. kinda sleepy right now. Let's just leave it to the next writer to carry from whichever story he/she wishes.
It works great as part 12 :D
Wow, your part is great. yea the mistake can happen. I'm glad the story is progressing.
Pt 3
His wife was obviously oblivious. She was giggling and carrying on about something...I wasn't really paying attention. I was half scared and half excited. Women have a way of knowing...things. I know, I am one.
You can see when something has happened so I resolved not to make eye contact with her. I also couldn't fight the urge of my bladder filling up.
Too much coffee before the flight.
Great.
Now I'd have to walk by them at least twice.
I waited as long as I could and just as I was about to pass their seats, he stood up, not seeing me, and almost knocked me into the passengers across the aisle from them with his hip. He turned and apologized and his eyes got wide realizing exactly who I was.
I said "thanks" in a sheepish tone as he helped me up and I made my way to the bathroom.
I did my business and just as I was about to exit, it was like perfect timing.
He came in and we locked the door.
The overwhelming passionate rush took control of both our bodies and -
LMAO!! You think a lot like I do!! :p
The Story~Part 8
...The Italian was in fact an Air Marshal, in a flurry of action that was too quick to take in, he had drawn his P250 Compact pistol in the 357 SIG caliber and commenced zip tying the terrorists who he had instantly realised only had replica weapons presenting no threat compared to his duty gun.
Once he had released the stewardess from her bindings and returned calm to the aeroplane passengers, the Italian came over to Joyce and sat down beside her. At this point the sunburn had completely vanished from her mind, the unbelievable events of this journey had put Joyce into turmoil with the attraction she felt for the Italian set in her mind against the long past history she had with the co-pilot. Right now there was only thing Joyce really needed, and that was a calming Gin and Tonic.
Really great way to tie all the loose ends and two different part 7's! LOL
I like the gin and tonic part ... good job ... i get to do the ending ...
The Story~Part 4
Pilot announced:
Turbulence is expected. The plane swung wildly to the left and I fell on him. It was a moment till we disengaged. This kind looking guy helped me up and asked me if I was fine. He was of average height , brown hair but had a nice smile.The plane swerved right and I fell on him.
The Story ~ Part 5
All of this would have been super fun had it not been for the damage incurred to my skin during the previous day's indiscretions. I bit my lip to keep from screaming as he grabbed me - with a roughness that would have been just right were it not for the searing pain that the sunburn added, and buried his face in my hair, kissed my neck... The pain subsided and I relaxed a little. My eyes closed involuntarily and a sigh escaped my lips. Then the plane lurched again, and this time I did scream, loud enough to be heard. A knock came at the restroom door and a voice asked "Are you alright in there?"
LOL! Nice, I like how the flow started back up again ... I get to do the ending ... dear lawd!
hah! Thank you ) I need to check back and see where this has gone...
please do!!
The Story~Part 10
She shook her head and glanced around. With all of the stewardesses setting about calming the passengers, she knew her needed drink would be a long time coming. With a sigh, Joyce turned to tell the Air Marshal how grateful she was for his rescue when a hand flew over the back of the seat and slapped his head, hard!!
While he gripped his head and groaned, she lept up and spun to meet the furious eyes of his wife! Whoops! She had forgotten about her! Glancing down at the sheepish face of her hero, so had he. His mouth opened but before he could say anything, angry wife let out a stream of italian that cut through the air. Looking around, Joyce could see the eyes of all of the passengers peeking up over their seats. Some looked angry, a few looked alarmed, but mostly, she could see amusement. Great, just what her day needed. Now she was front and center in a Jerry Springer show...
Covering his head, the pained husband snarled back a reply, which received nothing but silence.
Half expecting her to be holding a gun by the way her day was going, Joyce turned again to the woman. The dark-haired beauty was staring out of the window of the plane, mouth agape, completely transfixed.
Before she could ask what the woman was looking at, a crackling of static filled the air and the cabin was filled with a tremendous...
nice, i like the detail and more information on the wife as well as the slap and reference to JSS haahahahah
Thanks to you Eaglespirit!
You are very welcome brisby! Did you see the end?
The Story~Part 11
...white light. The light so thick, Joyce can't see her own hand in front of her face. When the light fades, she notices the wife is gone. Looking around the cabin, she realizes everyone else is gone too! She stands there, trying to rationalize what she's seeing.
The cockpit! The door's still open! Pushing her way through, Joyce freezes. Her breath caught in her throat at the sight before her...
yikes, nice way to keep us in suspense!! i get the ending ...
Part 18
Mom...where did you come from? Joyce honey you have to wake up or the plane is going to crash. Joyce...Joyce...Lady, lady wake up, someone was slapping the back of my hand. Huh...wa .What happened? You hyperventilated and passed out said the man in front of her. He had a kind gentle face and he was smiling at her, I’m a doctor and everything is going to be fine, he said. Looking past him she saw her Italian still arguing with his wife. Then a drop of green goo landed on her forehead. Looking up she saw green droplets forming at the bottom of the storage bin above her, then there was a darting movement to her left, looking toward the motion she saw, a purple squirrel sitting on the back of a headrest looking at her. Hurry said the squirrel, you don’t have much time!
thank you for this, because i have the ending and this is where i was going ... hahahaah
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
@brisby did you put him up to this?!!
Bwaahahahaha! 😂😄🤣
Ha Deacon!! 😂 What did she drink before she got on the plane? This is terrific!
😜🤣
I re-read everything and I could only find that she had definitely drank some coffee. It may have been laced with spirit squirrel droppings!
ahahah exactly!! well no drinking but she definitely fell asleep ... twas all a dream!
The story - Part 7
...with a gun. Joyce froze in shock. An announcement was made soon enough amidst screams of terror from the passengers. The plane had been effectively hijacked by a group of terrorists. All passengers were warned to be quiet and cooperative if they hoped to get out of the plane alive.
Two other gun men had appeared from nowhere and were tying up the stewardess who was just coming around while the Co-pilot led Joyce to her seat.
Shaken beyond her wits, Joyce allowed herself to be led back to her seat, the pains of the sunburn now the least of her problems.
She probably wouldn't have noticed had the Italian's wife not been giggling and restless a moment ago. She wasn't on her seat.
Joyce wondered where she was in this nightmarish moment when she remembered the Italian hadn't returned with her.
Looking back in search of him, what she saw would shock her even more....
Oh noooos ... two part 7's!! Kind of two different takes on how the story could go ... interesting too!
The story~part 9
She whispered to herself 'i could really use a drink right now'
Spontaneously she fell into deep thoughts reminiscing the lovely moments she had with the pilot..how could he have left without any words after promising marriage
Filled with anger and frustration which was written all over her face she lowered her head wishing there was a shoulder to lean on
'Ma'am ma'am' voiced the italian
She turned
'Are you hurt? He asked'
The story~Part 13.
What the hell?! Where am I?
The being stood there behind me. Tall. We teleported somewhere. That's what I know. I'm trying to regain balance; while he's combing his hair. Wavy, dreamy hair. Nice built. With its dark cape dancing with the water. WAIT....WHAT?! We're literally in the water. Submerged. Agh. I can't breathe. Agh.
"It's okay. It's okay", said the being as he reveals his face.
"Air. I need air." Gasping. Panicking. God, don't let me die like this.
"It's okay. You can breathe here."
I can't hold my breathe any longer. I'm gasping for air to breathe. Sorry for disobeying my parents. Sorry for everything. Just give me a second chance, Lord. I draw my last breathe. That's it. I'm dead.
Where is the light? Where are the saints that should be welcoming me in heaven? Is this heaven? Or hell? Nothing was heaven-like. All I can see is a handsome man. With a perfect hair. He's above me. Talking. Shouting? Is this Jesus? Or God? He's got a very nice teeth. Are those jawlines real? His eyes are sparkling bright. It was.......
"Everything's fine, miss." It was the being who saved me from an airplane incident.
"I'm not dead?"
"You're not. You are in my kingdom. Well, soon-to-be kingdom. I'm Evan, by the way. King Evan, if you may."
"I'm Joyce. And what am I doing here?"
"Well, this kingdom isn't going to be mine until I find my own queen. So.........."
This is insane. This is just a dream, I hope. I wanna pinch myself to wake myself up. Heck! My sunburn's gone.
this is awesome!
Hahahaha I'm loving this game.
hilarious!! tons of twists and turns for sure ... how will the ending be ... sheesh ...
This game is awesome, right?
Oh yes! Loved it :)
Me too. I hope I'll know if the next game is up.
I’m
Sure you’ll be haunting snooks posts. Buahahhahah
Already followed her bwahahahaha
The story ~ Part 14.
This can't be happening. I am.. underwater? And what even is this being before me. This goes beyond anything I have ever been taught. I take a deep breath but it's weird, being underwater.
"You must understand this is all very sudden and confusing. How did we even teleport here. Who are you? Why choose me?" She was slowly developing a headache.
"All in due time, my queen. First, a cup of our finest alcoholic beverage"
Well... she did say she needed a drink.
OMeeeee gosh .. this is getting complicated ... LOL
I am so excited right now. Will they get married? And Joycelet go of being a mere human being? Is Evan a good guy? What happened to the other passengers in the airplane. Hahahaa
Oh yay!
I knew you were up to something! 😁
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Loving the story so far :D
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The Story part ~ 17
“Where did all this start? wasn't I ... No no no wait no ! I don't want to remember!”
She just realised that all this is a dream and once she remembers where she were when she fell asleep, she will wake up. When she was embarrassed and just wanted to be somewhere else, the clouds happened. When she wanted an explanation, no matter how strange would it be, the being happened.. but wait. The last thing she wants now is to remember.
"YES! let's do that. Lets get married and have kids" She yelled, thinking this will keep the dream going while she figures out how to make the best out of this situation.
All she has to do now is to test her theory. She closed her eyes and had a deep thought to decide what she wants "chocolate!.. or... a diamond!.. ok chokolate and a diamond" then she opened her eyes to find Evan on his knees offering her a ring with a big shiny diamond. She gave him her hand and her heart almost jumped out of her chest while he was putting the ring on her finger. Then the ceremony started and everything felt magic but there was one thing missing. She knows now what exactly she will wish for next "Her mom". So many times after her mom's death she wished she could see her one more time but this time she can play with this reality and make anything happen.
What she was waiting for happened in a very exaggerated way. Four men came in holding a giant bowl full of little pieces of chocolate.They distributed a small part of it was to everyone and gave all the rest to her and her king. She didn't even touch the chokolate. She just closed her eyes and said "Mom!"
The Story ~ Part 15.
She raised the glass to her lips and guzzled the cocktail, which tasted like sambuca mixed with oranges. It calmed her nerves, and she let out a sigh. Evan gazed expectantly into her eyes, and she saw the clearest blue eyes that mirrored the ocean in the sunlight.
Tiny bubbles escaped from his mouth as his blond hair floated upwards to the sky.
"I have waited such a long time for you Joyce", Evan said, "and look at my beautiful prize."
Joyce felt like all her fears, both conscious and unconscious had disappeared. As if the beverage had given her an energy cleanse, and she had crystal clear intuition.
"The passengers and crew on the aircraft are our people." She said.
"Yes," said Evan, "and the terrorists are from Zantan, the land of the polar ice caps."
"We have been at war with The Zantans for twenty years, but you, my love, helped us defeat them today. The stewardess was one of them."
Oh yes. That was I was expecting. That the passengers were his people. This game needs another story/contest this week.
Totally! This was so much fun!!
"My poor son." lolo too funny. Mine too.
I'd love to play! It's very similar to a poetry game I ran a while back, but it didn't go very far bc I was so new, so I put it aside for later. Check it out here, it was also a chain with a video at the end: https://steemit.com/poetry/@bennettitalia/steemit-collaborative-poetry-experiment
Tip! For the amazing idea and for pushing us all to write ^^
I cant wait to see the final video
Ohhhhhhhhh I love your part!!!!!!!!! :D yeahhhhhhhhh
The Story ~ Part 16
"That stewardess was a bitch, I'm glad she's dead." said Joyce.
Evan rejoiced, "Let us all go to my Kingdom and begin our festivities, we have to prepare for a wedding."
Joyce thought "your Kingdom, a wedding, kids?" What am I doing?
Hahhaha ... super funny piece of the story ...
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I'm really sorry I don't have the brain power to participate this time, but what a fun idea!?
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PART 19
'Much time for what?' Joyce asked the squirrel. She looked around, no one else seemed to be paying this squirrel any attention. Could it be that only she could see a purple squirrel on an airplane?
'I am your spirit squirrel,' it continued, 'Tasked with keeping you up to date with happenings in the fantastical realm, the realm of creativity and innovation, fantasy and myth. You have been experiencing fantasmagoria, a condition, you may have noticed, that can cause you to jump back and forth between different possible realities in a moderately coherent way.'
'What?'
'I can prove it', said the squirrel, 'Notice the number of times that you have gone back and forth between first and third person on this plane flight alone! Was your ex-lover pilot a terrorist or just jealous of the married italian? This whole episode is ripe with Fantasmagoria! And now there is not much time!
'Not much time for wha....???' Joyce blurted out, loosing patience, as the distinct lines of the inner cabin began to swirl, Joyce began to wonder just what the heck was in all that coffee she drank before the flight.
Are you trying to cheat us or hold us in suspense? 😮 😃
Oh gosh I got rushed off and then fell asleep! Sorry about this, its coming out now!
Edit: DONE!
Ha ha ha, awesome! You probably needed a nap to be able to come up with "Fantasmagoria!"
Hahahaahah great word too.