He locked all of the doors and turned off some of the main lights, but then circled around with some curiosity to see if the lady in the dining room had finally stopped her stubborn twitching, those last desperate nerves and muscles giving in to the greyish expression of mortal surprise on her face after being hung from the overhead lamp fixture with a few good loops of that dental floss that she'd asked for. She had.
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Thank you for hanging your murderous and dreadful entry in the comments section, but in order to be a valid entry, please read all the rules, you must follow my other account @peacemaker to be considered eligible for winning :) Once you do so, I shall add you to the post above, thanks again.
Oh I could've sworn I'd already followed you there, now it's done. Thanks for the contest, a lot of good entries so far-- I resteemed for more.
Thank you very much for following and the resteem, appreciate that, I will add your valid entry to the new post, not the one you resteemed but the See All The Entries So Far update of the contest
Awesome thank you, I went to follow there the other day and somehow forgot to click.
No worries, it's all good, you're very welcome
Yikes, that is a very vivid image! I like that the first sentence is a mile and the second one is two words. It emphasizes the stubborn twitching. I'm going to his updated post to vote in a bit:)
The first one was so long that it nearly got too far away from why he'd circled back around.
Thanks for reading and commenting, I was afraid it was too horrible to write.