You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Nothing Fishy About This Haiku ContestView the full contextView the direct parentvdux (61)in #contest • 6 years ago middle line is too long!
Ok a A slight variation
Like fish in water ..
traveling through the sweet pages
and I see your face!
https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@felixgarciap/your-face-a-haiku-poem-bd85020e1dcaeest
I'll count traveling as two syllables, which it is in some parts of the US. How about that!