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RE: IN THE KINGDOM OF THE STEEMITITIANS #2: THE LONG WAIT

in #creativity7 years ago (edited)

With patience and endurance

For a glorious coming
Of the great one
To be announced
That finally my day has come

Is it for judgement
No not now
For applaud
Ohh so great

His wish for me are good
Not of evil
To a glorious end
The beginning of great deeds

I cannot count
His merciesLike mustard
Little in men's eyes
But great it's potential

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Entry received. Thanks for participating in the contest. What would you say about the story? Constructive criticism is welcome. Thanks you @febizle

It needs a new dimension in the sense that the character has gone to a while new level that is filled with suspense,adventure and lessons he failed to realise earlier