Entry received. Thanks for participating in the contest. What would you say about the story? Constructive criticism is welcome. Thanks you @febizle
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Entry received. Thanks for participating in the contest. What would you say about the story? Constructive criticism is welcome. Thanks you @febizle
It needs a new dimension in the sense that the character has gone to a while new level that is filled with suspense,adventure and lessons he failed to realise earlier