It is a touching story, but the writing is not excellent. It may be difficult to truly judge the quality of written English if it is not your native language - I might humbly suggest that if you felt this was exceptional written English, you might want to focus on other areas of curation like art or music where the language barrier would not be an issue. This would not be approved as a submission to curie just on the quality of the writing.
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