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RE: Announcing new share options for your fights, gang bosses kicking players and some help with the airdrop

in #drugwars6 years ago

Maybe get your new community person to proof read everything. So many typos. They make my eyes bleed.

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lol it's never good enough for some obviously, isn't she doing way better than previous posters? ;)

I am, personally, very concerned about the health of our users and do not want to see them hurting. There are two different proof-reading apps that I use and my eyes as the third one but I understand and accept that there is always a chance that some things will, unfortunately, be missed. This post will be checked by additional people and edited accordingly.

I think not as many typos now but some statements do seem a bit off. Maybe a american english thing, like this one:

It is normal that some will disappoint us and with some life will happen and spread us in opposite directions.

There are 2 and's in the statement and i think it should be send instead of spread. English is not by first language so maybe I am wrong.

Some will dissapoint us, for others, life outside of crypto will spread them too thin.

That would be my suggestion. :)

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I like the sound of that.