Un-spoke-spell
original spoke poetry
This audible wheel's
got five spokes
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Un-spoke-spell
I.
Seen – seals
implying sorcery:
the crisp air to scry.
Trudging – troughs contain me,
in an instant epiphany I break free.
II.
Fingers of eyes.
Curling hair wisping sight.
Alighting upon the mind rising;
Passerbys taken aback by my flight.
III.
Scroll break the effects of the lingering spell:
digital, derogatory, devil I repel.
A verse to shatter its decadent duration;
A quatrain to seal away a dangerous formation.
IV.
Thought – eyes – people – speech
world – tongues – unfurling – rungs
repeating – sentiments – in new – alignment
elaborate – archetype – emphatic – confinement.
V.
Counting one,
two, three, four, five
until the seal is broken
& the spell becomes unspoken.
Writing, audio, & images
created by @d-pend
on 3/28/18
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& @dsound
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Great collection of images and thought. Very effective outcome.
The internet is like for me sometimes. You just can't look away. I will just google one more thing or read one more steemit post. And before you know it, it's three hours later.
This is totally a unic topic to do poetry. Keep it up.
Lol....I think at this point I'll leave poetry to the poets.
It was lovely to look at the photos though.
But to be honest, what the heck does this mean? I feel so dumb right now!
HEEEELLLP!!!!
Nice post
Love love loving this more experimental stuff. That fourth verse especially, the way you deconstruct everything and let individual words reflect meaning unhindered. The whole thing feels like a commentary on poetic language itself, its malleability and irreverence. I dig it, is what I'm trying to say :)
Hello. Please check my blog for my first poem
You're pretty good at this poetry shit man. I know you likely know that already but I just want you to know I know. Yknow.
(I'm trying to "embrace the community" any tips for not making this the worst off the top you're the only dude i know on here I can give a sincere compliment [i knows theres more but idk where they at])
Five verses, five stanzas and five spokes. Very unique. I love the style of writing and taken by the use of words here. Truly epic.
I like this poem a lot @d-pend. At first glance it looks simple but there is a depth of symbolism. I like the way you spoke over your voice on another track and then added some techno sounds... great science fiction wizardry going on there.
Peace,
@mineopoly
oooooowwwweeee, that audio track is fking Awesome!
This is my favourite one >
Scroll break the effects of the lingering spell:
digital, derogatory, devil I repel.
A verse to shatter its decadent duration;
A quatrain to seal away a dangerous formation.
This one is very strong
Thought – eyes – people – speech
world – tongues – unfurling – rungs
repeating – sentiments – in new – alignment
elaborate – archetype – emphatic – confinement.
You have a lot of the word break in all of them though and it sort of tripped me up. I know it is most likely intentional but I have the feeling that most of these (feel the last one is a bit without heart , god you must hate me by now :P ) are so polished that using that kind of blunt repetition takes form them ... Seriously though save for the last one and the lots of broken I really loved them ... don't eat me ...
Whenever i do have the feelings of boredom i simply turn myself to read the any form of the poetry. Your voice over and the deep meaning lines are truly amazing ,
Love the every single feeling of the words, wonderful @d-pend :)
excellent work on this poem thanks for sharing this beautiful poem really an honour to read such poems everyday :)
Interesting as usual ! Your medz are deep , confusing at times but deep!
This is really nice. The stylistic anesthetics are right on point.
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