This creation is an invitation to look at the edge of the world. It is a sign of provocation of everything and nothing, up and down. A whirlpool that envelops and elevates to unimaginable heights, which raises the volume of sound It is to rise to the consciousness of being alive. The repetition of the verses in the last two stanzas seems to me masterly due to the reconcentration of the idea. Good job, @ d-pend. I'm excited to read your poetry. A strong and strong hug!
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