You're pitching it just the right way. When we tell others about Steem we need to consider their point of view and face all scam charges head on.
Trying to give a too "professional" impression would be bad marketing strategy, because most marketers are horrible at their job!
that part about how 'most marketers are horrible at their job!'
nothing but the truth right there. Too many are taking shortcuts. That hurts them, and makes the profession look bad. smh .... I've been hampering about that one for several years now; like an angry preacher on a corner.
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