I like the progression! Still a strange element of mystery to who this man is and at the same time the mystery of who she is and what she is capable of.
The introduction of a possible alien entity is exciting as well as the satellite. Could there be an organization playing overwatch with the whole planet? So many great thought-provoking questions in the writing. You are building up some suspense well, the lonely anxious atmosphere is definitely set.
Nailed it!
Glad you are enjoying it <3