Orange-black streaking muscle hit me hard in the throat as Aasa shrieked a high pitch wail and the soft hoots of the Macaque broke into ... wow! Descriptive, fast-paced, action-packed 5-minute freewrite! Well done, Raj!
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Thanks @carolkean. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece and it's gratifying that you noticed the pace as I felt like I achieved the effect of frantic movement in this freewrite that I wanted. As long as people are reading and enjoying, I am gonna keep writing them :-)