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Thanks @jeffstoner, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I really like these weekend freewrites which are written on a stop watch timer. They don't always produce the most polished work but I find that they allow me to work without the inner critic constantly second guessing my every move. Often, what comes out is good and something I can expand on for a longer story. That is what I am thinking of doing with this freewrite at some point in the future. Thanks for your feedback and for stopping by 🙂