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RE: Arcturus

in #fiction • 8 years ago (edited)

You are right here. I was using the conversation to drive home these points but certainly could have done it another way similar to what you suggest.

In fact I really like that paragraph you edited above. I am more than happy to discuss these further. I am not hugely experienced in writing. I have ideas and storylines in my head and appreciate any help in getting those ideas out in a more organic way.

So yes, please feel free to discuss further.

And thank you. I do appreciate comments such as this. It is how we learn rather than just throwing out stories into the ether with no feedback.

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    Thank you for understanding!

    I am writing an article of a sort and would like to use one sentence from the second part of your story as an illustration of the point I am making. I found your story at random, was just scanning some of them. Most of the work in your story were nicely done and I won’t be tangled with other problems. So cool. Once I finish, I’ll send you the link to the article.

    Cheers

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      That would be fantastic. You are welcome to use the line. I am fascinated now by which one lol. I look forward to reading your post. Do send the link in case I miss it :-)

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