You used the wrong present tense for smile the correct tense would be smile usually anything with “ed added to it is a past tense creation . For example past, present, future- smiled, smiling/smile, smile. Smile is in that case tricky as it can be used for present and future tense reference. Like going to smile asked to smile and glued a smile on his face the reason is is because a smile is also by itself a single object description. I like your use of the word evicted it’s not tellable if that was a mistake or a creative alternative to the common English phrase removed/took there are also alternatives like snatched and stole for forceably taken. Other than that you for got to put a capital letter here and there. But that is all! You did really well! I’m learning Spanish myself and after a while you do start to observe a language pattern and freelancing and guessing is a great way to encourage learning development. And is fun. You did good.
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Thank you Gentleman ! Your help and my efforts will make me better. It had been a long time that I didn't practiced in English.
I will soon recapitulate all those stuff!