Hey gentleman! You upvote me ,could you do me another favor? In, my work is n't there so many error? Please reply...
It will help me to improve myself...
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Hey gentleman! You upvote me ,could you do me another favor? In, my work is n't there so many error? Please reply...
It will help me to improve myself...
You used the wrong present tense for smile the correct tense would be smile usually anything with “ed added to it is a past tense creation . For example past, present, future- smiled, smiling/smile, smile. Smile is in that case tricky as it can be used for present and future tense reference. Like going to smile asked to smile and glued a smile on his face the reason is is because a smile is also by itself a single object description. I like your use of the word evicted it’s not tellable if that was a mistake or a creative alternative to the common English phrase removed/took there are also alternatives like snatched and stole for forceably taken. Other than that you for got to put a capital letter here and there. But that is all! You did really well! I’m learning Spanish myself and after a while you do start to observe a language pattern and freelancing and guessing is a great way to encourage learning development. And is fun. You did good.
Thank you Gentleman ! Your help and my efforts will make me better. It had been a long time that I didn't practiced in English.
I will soon recapitulate all those stuff!