RE: The story of Mr. Renhe Ren (Finish The Story Entry)

[agmoore]

I repeat my sentiment, expressed below (under @wakeupkitty): you wrote a true fable, with a sound lesson and you did it elegantly.

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[calluna]

Thank you ❤️ I did think it was a bit risky in terms of leaving it so open, I have slightly edited the ending which hopefully carries it a bit more. Thank you ❤️

[agmoore]

Hats off to a great writer--self-doubt comes with the territory

[theironfelix]

The Wholetariat at work here:

[agmoore]

✨🌟