Fan-tas-tic! You flipped the script and had me cheering for the soldiers to take down the lazy rulers. Each example of the abuses to the other castes by the 'ultimate bananafish' had me hoping for them to receive their comeuppance by the end.
Your portrayal of the dismal life led by the oppressed made that moment when they handed over the fattened and lazy upper caste fitting and priceless! It's after 12:30 in the morning and I shouted "HA!!" when the representatives pointed in unison to the palace! (Luckily the others in the house are heavy sleepers. 😂)
Thanks to you (and to the fortuitous arrival of the alien soldiers), their days of subjugation and fear are over. Their break was long overdue.
I think maybe the bananafish mechanic caste had something to do with the arrival of the alien soldiers...you can't keep 29 lower caste bananafish down forever :)
:^D Very true!