I agree, an excellent change of rhythm and pov. It's a great pleasure to read your unique interpretation of the first half. Your banana-social critique is poignant and your writing style flows so pleasantly. Bravo @agmoore! I'm happy to read you again :-)
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Thank you! It's the first time I read the Salinger story. It helped me to find an opening for my story in @theironfelix's setup. So much energy in @theironfelix--wanted to do it justice.
He's a living dynamo! ..And your writing is strong but fine at the same time.