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RE: The story of Mr. Renhe Ren [my entry to Finish the Story Contest - Week #44!]

in #finishthestory6 years ago

I like the story, good ending too. Just one point. The strong man should have a golden beard not a bread (bread is what you eat, beard is what men have on their face. Very similar spelling).

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Ha ha ha! You're right.

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