You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: My Entry - Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #35!View the full contextmarcoriccardi (59)in #finishthestory • 6 years ago Very realistic dialogues and tactics, or at least that was my sensation reading your ending!
Thanks, From the story I was wondering why it had to be on the starboard side.... Then turning around you lose the wind so.... My engineering brain was having trouble with the story so I had to fix those pieces.