You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Bananafish Denouement: Finish the Story Contest #40View the full contextmichaias (56)in #finishthestory • 6 years ago Fucking. Baller. The disjointed narrative threw me off at first, but that ending was so worth the build-up! Well done!
The nice thing about being a writer--you get to order the universe the way you want it, not the way it is. I love your comment!