Ah, th' noise-work and pirate/redneck accents in this post be a godsend. Regardless, this ending did good in th' combat scene and made some good use o' pirate tactics. Also the fact that th' two ships were active in spite of what anybody was doin', thus a natural background scene that interrupted the foreground scene. Anyhow, th' Madame/Lass Cap'n was active and she command'd well in her spot, so can't complain t'ere.
Withal, the last sentences leaves a suspenseful cliffhanga', that's fo' sho'. So leavin' us to guiltily think o' what happen'd th' scene after. Ho! Upvot'd and resteem'd.
lol, I was have'n a bit of trouble keeping my accents straight. Pirate to me is almost Irish/old english with a bit of that thar redneck stuff intermingled.... Then if you get into the Spanish pirates it gets even worse.
Hopefully, I did your story proud.
Aye, yah fo' sho' did laddie. Interestin' to consida' th' slaves in th' Caribbean havin' t'eir own influence on Pirate as well. So a united/common Pirate accent shall technically be Scots-Irish accents with slave influences, then just French and Spanish pidgin thrown in.