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RE: Day 47 : 5 Minute Freewrite - Prompt: airplane

in #freewrite7 years ago

Hi.. this is my entry this time: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@ahmadmanga/freewrite-classroom-windows-to-the-adventures-short-story

(I think I didn't post anything the last week.. did i?)

for those only for the story it's below:

Classroom Windows to the Adventures

"It's an airplane!! an airplane!!"

As I heard him I went as fast as I could to the window. "It's beautiful..."

"Hey, what's the interesting in that..." the glass wearing classmate pt her hands on my shoulder. "we see it like-- everyday or something?"

"Not everyday you nerd!!" shouted the energetic boy "These planes leave the country you know?! it's an adventure."

"you..." I looked to him, hoped I was wrong. "..want to leave the country too?"

"Yup!! I want to go to all sorts of adventures." He showed me-- Us the biggest smile. "You should go too."

"If I could..." I would like to go with you everywhere... I didn't say that part. "Lets ride a plane when we grow up."

[The End?]