RE: Monkey (Short Fiction)

[brisby]

I'm afraid that I'm in with the crowd who doesn't understand why Mr. Lion, then Mandy, started to cry. I enjoyed reading your lead in, how you wrote her nervousness and the bit where she felt she had to work on her smile made me chuckle.

The town of Freewrite has a special treat today! A truly phenomenal piece by @deadgrlsuppastar!Please give credit to her art!

Freewrite Day 147

Also, don't forget to visit and follow our new pageFREEWRITE HOUSE!

_{Click the graphic to join in the fun!}