Ooooh, I really like where you went with this! I want to hear more stories of these tribes now and that's a mark of a good story. You've left me wanting more :)
I’m helping marianne out today and visiting freewriters, here is the prompt for the next freewrite!
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-84-5-minute-freewrite-thursday-prompt-sound-check