I liked the pressing narration but I lost mysef on "are you my collar"..will re-read it probably!
Yesterday a group of ancient bananafish appeared to me in a dream. They gave me a mission: to mariannewestize myself and bring the freewrites' gospel to the world!
Single prompt option
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/weekend-freewrite-01-13-2018-single-prompt-option
3 prompt option
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/weekend-freewrite-jan-13-2018-part-1-the-first-sentence
Yeah, bounty would have worked better. I'm still debating whether I should go back and edit a free write after finishing it. I'd also fix the through/throat typo...
Oh I edit and a lot.. in the end, what I care is to give quality to my blog. That's why I tend - freewrites or not - to not create too much "word porridges".. with bounty it makes lot of sense, I like it, and it doesn't break the reader's attention..
Well, you've convinced me, I'll be updating it.
Bounty is definitely a better word.