A Heart-Found State

in #freewrite6 years ago

Redemption is pure natural beauty.....

This was my first attempt at the Five Minute Freewrite. Today's prompt was Redemption. It almost became a poem, maybe it still is...
Typed on my device I didn't get very far in 5 minutes. Maybe I will use a pencil next time. Maybe I'm just slow...

Redemption is pure natural beauty.
Redemption is a wish.
There is no redemption without a fall, thus by bittersweetness we are blessed.
It can also come from things, not by the self undone; but by reconciliation with fellow humans.
So coveted and desirable; yet without it we are lost.

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Absolutely gorgeous poem and poetry! I'm so glad you jumped on with #freewritepoetry! Don't worry about length, your thoughts spoke volumes of truth.

Thank you! I found a connection with the prompt and just went with it. Freewriting is interesting because there is no time to try and make sense...

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that's it! It's a runaway!

Welcome to the freewriters club :)

Beautiful poem depicts the meaning of redemption. Pure natural beauty.

You can try with pencil and see how far you can go.

Hereby, I am delivering the next prompt to you, here it is, check it out! It is 'pumped.'

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